The Story: Part I

Here is the first part of the story from Hannah R.

"Boarah and her brother, Meired, live the islands of M'gyru, in the small kingdom of Vinal. Boarah and Meired have an uncle (who happens to be a secret agent) and a cousin: Mlaidlin and Anaira. Anaira and Boarah are as close as sisters and they do everything together.

One day, as they were walking together in the woods of Maid Valley, they came upon an old, dark, spooky looking castle in a small open place. Their curiosity (of course) gets the better of them and they go up to it and sneak in. They find a room in which a man and a woman are talking, and over hear they're plans. Boarah gets caught and Anaira escapes (without them ever knowing she was there).

The plans they overheard were such: Leialand (the man) and his wife, Shlaneth, were scheming to have their (Bane) marry the Princess Lethlene, so he could use her money to pay off all his debts, instead of theirs. The only difficulty was that the princess was already engaged to Prince Allister of Rile. Shlaneth suggested that the prince be quietly “disposed of.” Her husband (being a selfish, cold-hearted brute!!!) readily agreed. After planning their scheme out for some time, Shlaneth goes towards the door and hears the footsteps as they run down the hall.

Boarah and Anaira separate and run all over the castle until Boarah gets caught and Anaira escapes out a window. Leialand has Boarah locked up and Anaira goes and tells her dad what happened. Meired (Boarah's brother, if you'll remember), Mlaidlin, and Mlaidlin's co-workers, Adis and Cameron decide to look into it, but Dr. Frent (their boss) doesn't consider the information credible, and tells them the agency will not support them in their investigation. So they follow the trail unofficially, and get Boarah out after Bane left and the prince had been killed.

When those ^ people go to find Boarah, they make Anaira stay home and she gets caught alone at her house by some people hired by Leialand and, after intense fighting back, she gets away from him and runs outside, only to be caught by the ones waiting out there. (I'm gonna get the rest of it up later, if I can. And I'm working on a sort of picture/mappish sort of thing of the islands, and the people and places, and the character profiles.)"

She said that she is open to ideas anyone might have. Just leave it in a comment.